Tuesday, June 17, 2014

AP Summer Work 2014



AP English 3                                          Summer 2014                                       Ms. Keyser 
                                                                                                                             Mr. Konkoly

Overview:  You are reading a brief article, three essays, and two books.  You are writing three reflections and three essays. Plagiarism is not tolerated and will be given consequences according to school policy.

The article and essays, or links to them, can be found at http://dkonkoly.blogspot.com
You also will find other helpful materials there. Plus, you can use the comment option to pose questions and reply to each other.

You will have to get the two books through the library (cwmars.org is a website to use to request a book using your library card), buy them, or share them.
Reading and Reflecting as a Writer

Read the article “What Do Students Need to Know about Rhetoric?” to develop an understanding of rhetoric.  Then use your understanding as you read each of the essays listed below.  Have your marked up copy of that essay with you on the first day.


For any THREE of the essays, write a typed 1-2 page, single-spaced (max. 500 words) reflection in which you articulate and explain your understanding of some of the “rhetorical decisions” the author makes by applying the ideas from “What Do Students Need to Know About Rhetoric?.” You are being asked to read the essay as a writer, to imagine the composition of the essay in light of the rhetorical dimensions of all compositions.


Chang-Rae Lee, “Coming Home Again”
Scott Russell Sanders, “Under the Influence”
Judy Brady, “I Want a Wife”
George Orwell, “Shooting an Elephant”
Mark Twain, “Two Ways of Seeing a River”

Your Own Personal Essay

Write a cohesive personal essay that includes the following elements in any order: Using narrative technique, describe two or three events from the last year that illustrate your relationship with technology. Include reflections on your relationship with technology and your thoughts on its benefits and detriments.
Your typed, single-spaced essay should be 750-1000 words. It should be a polished essay, not a first draft, but it is all right if you still have misgivings about some aspect of it.



The Art of Nonfiction  

You will write an essay in response to each text. Each typed, single-spaced essay should be 750-1000 words.

1. Read Alone Together: Why We Expect More from Technology and Less from Each Other by Sherry Turkle.

Identify at least three core arguments that Turkle presents and fully develops. In what ways does she use language (word choice, sentences, structure of the book, or other strategies) to convince the reader of her ideas? Evaluate her argument: in what ways is it convincing? What ideas or perspectives does she minimize or leave out that would contradict her argument?

2. Read Behind the Beautiful Forevers: Life, Death, and Hope in a Mumbai Undercity by Katherine Boo.
In an interview, Katherine Boo was asked, "What was it about the stories you tell in this book that appealed to you more than other stories you saw or heard in Annawadi? How did you choose the people you would write about?" She replied: "When I start a project, I follow as many people as I can–go where they go, do what they do, whether they’re teaching kindergarten or stealing metal scrap or running a household. The larger the pool of people I get to know, the better I can distinguish between anomalous experiences and shared ones. As a writer I’m not looking to tell the most flamboyant tales, nor to describe only the most virtuous and super-talented people. I’m looking for resonant stories—stories that might illuminate something about the structure of a society. And it’s difficult to predict in the beginning which individuals’ experiences, months or years later, will come to shed that light."

Select one of the people about whom Boo writes. Write an essay in which you analyze what the depiction of that person reveals about the structure of society in Annawadi. Make sure to include your observations regarding how Boo writes about that person (for example, the details she chooses and the words she uses).
Help
Feel free to email your teacher with questions after you first have tried consulting a classmate (wkeyser@hwrsd.org or dkonkoly@hwrsd.org).  We will be checking email periodically, so you might not get an immediate reply.  Don’t save your questions for the last minute!

Deadlines and Submission Guidelines
Always save copies of your work for yourself!

1. One essay reflection and the personal essay are due July 12th.  (This will allow us to get back to you if your work shows the need for corrective feedback or instruction. We might ask you to submit a second reflection if we think that will help.)

2.  Response to Behind the Beautiful Forevers: Life, Death, and Hope in a Mumbai Undercity is due on August 2nd.

3. The other two reflections and the essay response to Alone Together: Why We Expect More from Technology and Less from Each Other are due on August 25th.

 Please submit all work to turnitin.com.  

Ms. Keyser’s class: The class ID is 8153309; the enrollment password is keyser.
Mr. Konkoly’s class: The class ID is 8153340; the enrollment password is konkoly.

Assessment and Grading

The essay reflections should demonstrate an accurate understanding of the text, attention to details of the text, insights into rhetorical decisions, and an explanation of those insights using evidence.  By meeting these criteria and completing all of the reflections, your work will be proficient or exemplary and will receive full credit for grading purposes.  This grade is part of the homework/coursework category of your grade.

The personal essay should have a clear subject, use specific details, include moments of reflection, and have an engaging and engaged voice. You will receive full credit for an essay that meets these criteria and a final grade will be given after you complete more work on the essay in the fall. Essays that are sloppy in their writing or organization and not proofread are not acceptable and will not receive summer credit. The summer version counts as homework/coursework and the final version counts as an essay grade.

The essays in response to the two books will be evaluated as follows and the grades count as an essay grade for the first term:


advanced
proficient   
developing
inadequate
Presents and develops a coherent and thoughtful perspective in response to the prompt.




Shows an accurate and insightful understanding of the book.  




Provides relevant and sufficient details to support your claims.




Explains supporting details in relation to the overall development of your essay.




Use of language (sentence clarity and variety; precise and appropriate vocabulary)




Demonstrates mastery of Standard English conventions, including citations.




Typewritten, double-spaced and 750-1000 words; on time.





First Article to Understand Rhetoric

Read this article before reading the other essays and writing your first rhetorical analysis.

It provides a good introduction to "thinking rhetorically" and explains some terminology and concepts you might be able to use.

 “What Do Students Need to Know about Rhetoric?”

http://apcentral.collegeboard.com/apc/members/repository/ap06_englang_roskelly_50098.pdf

You also will find some student samples below.

Links for Summer 2014 Work



Chang-Rae Lee, “Coming Home Again”
 http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/lesson_images/lesson998/ComingHomeAgain.pdf


Judy Brady, “I Want a Wife”
http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/everythingsanargument4e/content/cat_020/Brady_I_Want_a_Wife.pdf


George Orwell, “Shooting an Elephant”
http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/everythingsanargument4e/content/cat_020/Orwell_Shooting.pdf

Mark Twain, “Two Ways of Seeing a River”
http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/everythingsanargument4e/content/cat_020/Twain_TwoWaysofSeeing.pdf

Scott Russell Sanders, "Under the Influence" is in a separate post.

Sanders Essay: "Under the Influence"


UNDER THE INFLUENCE
Paying the price of my father's booze
By Scott Russell Sanders
Source: HARPER'S, Nov. 1989, pp. 68-75

My father drank. He drank as a gut-punched boxer gasps for breath, as a starving dog gobbles food--compulsively, secretly, in pain and trembling. I use the past tense not because he ever quit drinking but because he quit living. That is how the story ends for my father, age sixty-four, heart bursting, body cooling, slumped and forsaken on the linoleum of my brother's trailer. The story continues for my brother, my sister, my mother, and me, and will continue as long as memory holds.

In the perennial present of memory, I slip into the garage or barn to see my father tipping back the flat green bottles of wine, the brown cylinders of whiskey, the cans of beer disguised in paper bags. His Adam's apple bobs, the liquid gurgles, he wipes the sandy-haired back of a hand over his lips, and then, his bloodshot gaze bumping into me, he stashes the bottle or can inside his jacket, under the workbench, between two bales of hay, and we both pretend the moment has not occurred.

Sample Rhetorical Analysis 1


Sample Summer Rhetorical Analysis

Power of Death Over Life
In reading “The Death of a Moth” it is easy to just go along with the story but a closer look allows one to see how Virginia Woolf connected with the reader. In the first sentence the reader relates to the feelings of the writer. The author includes the reader by using the word “us”. This use of wording makes the reader imagine that they have felt the emotional sense they feel on autumn nights and understand it, whether they have actually experienced it or not. The observation of the surroundings, of the moth, the day, and the farm establish a context in which the reader is put into the particular scenario with the author. Therefore, one is able to feel where Woolf is coming from.
            Woolf uses the appeal of ethos when describing the pity felt towards the moth. The moth is pathetic, being enthralled in happiness with only being able to do so little, yet she connects the creature to something more significant. The sympathy felt is mixed with warmth;

Sample Rhetorical Analysis 2


Sample Summer Rhetorical Analysis

Cynthia Ozick, “The Seam of the Snail”                                                                   

            Cynthia Ozick uses imagery and personal stories to illustrate the differences between her and her mother’s form of excellence. She is able to show the contrast between herself and her mother vividly because the subject is something she knows very well. What can one know better than their own life? Ozick is very self-aware, admitting her own flaws and struggle for perfection. She also recognizes that her mother’s life was lived fully and that it had its own form of excellence. She understands that she will never be like her mother; she is too concerned with the trivial things and perfect details to live lavishly. She is the snail, trapped inside the confinements of flawlessness.
Ozick uses stories of things her mother did when she was growing up to make the character seem familiar and endearing. A reader of this essay will relate to the differences between Ozick and her mother, a woman who, “…thought herself capable of doing anything, and did everything she imagined. But nothing was perfect” (302). For example,